Sunday, December 29, 2013

Updated my fanfics ( love , dream & friendship )

I've already updated the story of Love , Dream and Friendship .... Sorry for the long postponed.... I've kind of busy lately ... So don't hve any time to updated it ....  but If i have a free time .... I will updated it .... Don't forget to leave a comment and thanks for viewing the story ... I really appreciated it ... Thnks really .... Please enjoy it ....


Friday, December 27, 2013

A Girl Who Stole My Heart ..

You , Myungsoo and Woohyun were close friends since kindergarten  ..... As you know each time if there are a long relationship with each other some of you might fall in love right ... so here is a short story about three bestfriend which hve been for about 5 years together .... Intan , Myungsoo and Woohyun .... So let's start the story ...


In front of school gate ....

You saw Myungsoo and Woohyun from afar ....

You : Yah !!! you guys ...

Woohyun saw and waved to you ..

Woohyun : Our Princess ... Is getting more taller ... Isn't it Myungsoo ?
Myungsoo : Yup ... and getting more prettier than we last meant ....
You : Haha , thanks .... ( BLUSHING )
Woohyun : Yah!!! We're not praising you .... Don't be too confident ... ( Woohyun run after saying that to avoid from you to hit him )

After hearing that  , You EXPLODE !!!

You : Yah !! Yah!! You'll see what I do ... After this!! Myungsoo-ah kachaa ...
Myungsoo : Okay , sure

In the school hall

The girls and boys were queuing for the first school assembly .....

Headmaster : Okay guys , thanks for being in here at the exact time ... Firstly, welcome for the freshman and welcome back for the senior
Students : Nae~~~
Headmaster : So , How's your holiday ? Is it amazing ?

While the headmaster was talking , Woohyun cut off the speech with his charm which call 'Aegyo'

Woohyun : Dae ~~ Sasaeng-nim !! ( making a cute voice )
Headmaster : ( the headmaster look kind of like this  =_=' and the hall went silent )

While you and Myungsoo pretend that you don't know him

Myungsoo : Wow ! That's embrassing..... How can't he be an immature person...
Intan : Yeah .  you're right ... Let's just pretend like we don't know him ....

Since the boys of your class are queneing besides you , so the girls have the chance to talk with the boys ...

The silent atmosphere turned wild after looking at Woohyun's aegyo especially The girls ....

Students : OMG !!! he's cuteee !!!
Girl 1 : Yeah , you're right ... I have an idea how about making a fanclub for him then ....
Girl 2 : Deal !!!

Myungsoo , who heard all the chattering just look at him like " there , he goes again " And now they are making a fanclub for him ...

Intan : there , there ... no worries you still the no 1 boy who can makes other girls heart melts and fulter..... Woohyun is just the 2nd boy who is famous after you ....

Woohyun for afar heard that ....

Woohyun : Yah !!! I heard that .....
Intan : Heard what ? I don't said anything about you ... Don't be too noticeable .....
Woohyun : What !!
Myungsoo : Yah , yah .... Don't fight in here ... We're in the school hall you know ....the headmaster is watching you guys right now ....

Both of you quit the fight after saw Myungsoo said that ...

Headmaster : Finish already ? ( the headmaster talk with the microphone on )

The students laughed and you know how ashamed you are after being laugh by all students in the school hall ...

Both WH and INTAN : I'm sorry sasaeng-nim ....
Headmaster : Let's continue where we stop .....

The headmaster end the speech after forty minutes ... And all the students went to their class for their studies .. You , Woohyun and Myungsoo were in the same class AGAIN ! after three months their school got their holiday ...

In the class ...

Woohyun were surrounded with full of girs around his desk ...

Girl 1 ; Woohyun Oppa !! You're so handsome .... Can I be your girlfriend?
Woohyun : Sure ... But the other girls will be jealous ....how about you be my wife instead ...
Girl 2 : Kyaaa !!! >_< !!

Intan who get pissed of with Woohyun greasiness finally revealed her anger ....

Intan : PFFT !! Pretending be their lovely husband ... my head !!!
Woohyun : Boya !! Are you picking a fight with me , Huh!?
Intan ; Whatever .... I don't care ....
Myungsoo : Can you guys please stop right now ... The teacher on her way to our class ... So just stop ... continue the fight later then ...

After a while ... the teacher is finally in their class ...

Mrs Hwang : Okay ... Since is the first day of school ... I want to appoint a class rep and one assistant and don't forget for the treasures .... And you you guys already have a choices please raise up your hand ....

Student 1 : I will choose Intan to be the class rep .....
Mrs Hwang : Any other choices ?
Students : Nope !!
Mrs Hwang : okay then .... Intan will be the class rep .... Intan , I hope you can handle the class .. I really got high exception towards you
Intan : Yes Saseang-nim , I will try my best ...
Mrs Hwang : Okay , next will be the class assistant and the treasures ... Any volunteer ?

No ones put up their hand ....

Mrs Hwang : No one? Okay then I will be making the choices .... Woohyun will be the assistant while Myungsoo will be the treasures since he's good in calculating ... Both of you is it okay ?
Woohyun : No big deal ....
Myungsoo : Yup ... Its okay ...
Mrs Hwang : If its okay ... Let's start the class ....
Students : Nae ~~~

After an hour ... recess time finally came ....

Intan : Aishhh !! I really pissed off with Woohyun right now .... Become so greasy and making all the girls fall in love with him ...
Myungsoo : That's his charm ... No one can handle it ...
Intan : But .... Ah!!! Forget about it ... Making my head become more painful when thinks about it
Myungsoo : So , don't think about it ....

Woohyun come to their place ....

Woohyun : Hey guys !! Can I sit here ?
Myungsoo : Sure , you can ....
Woohyun : Thanks , man !
Intan : ( Saw Woohyun and walk away ) I've got to go now ... enjoy your lunch ... Myungsoo I will see you later...
Myungsoo : Okay .....
Woohyun : What's wrong with that girl ....
Myungsoo :  Girls , their moods always change ... So just be patient ...
Woohyun : But seriously what happen to her .... she is not herself ....
Myungsoo : What do you mean by that ?
Woohyun : No , its nothing ..... just she is not Intan that i use to know ... who were really innocent and not a bad temper person ...
Myungsoo : Woohyun , can I ask you something ?
Woohyun : What is it ?
Myungsoo : Do you like her ?
Woohyun : Who? 
Myungsoo : Aishh , jinja ... Intan ...you punk ....
Woohyun :  Molla ... I just felt like I always want to be in her side always and forever .... But why did you ask such a question
Myungsoo : Oh , really.... haha ... nothing just curious ...
Woohyun : I smell something suspicious here ... Don't tell me that you like her too ....
Myungsoo : ( Myungsoo got startled with what Woohyun said ) Aniya .... No way .....
Woohyun : Ah ! really ... If its a yes ... I will make you my enemy then ...
Myungsoo : Don't worry , I will not take her from you ... Just relax .... Forget about it finish up your lunch quickly its only five minutes until recess over ...


RINGG !!! Finally recess over ... Lucky Woohyun to finish his food faster because after this it will be history class for them ... And the teacher quite strict ....

Woohyun and Myungsoo walk faster before the teacher came in ....

In class ...

Mr Lee : Okay guys .... I want you guys to make a group of three ... I want to give you guys an assignment .... So , quickly choose your partner before I choose them by myself

Hearing that the students quickly choose their group partner ... Woohyun , Myungsoo and Intan was in the same group as usual ....

Mr Lee : Already find your group partner ? Okay now I will give you guys the title for the assignment .... Since it was a history assignment .... I will give you guys a chance to research out of the school place ...
Intan : That's what I wanna hear ... Fresh air ... Releasing all the stressing in my body
Myungsoo : Good to hear that ... Thanks Mr Lee
Woohyun : Okay Mr Lee , we will try our best ...
Mr Lee : Since I have something to do today so it will be your self-study today ... before i went out any problem with the assignment i gave ?
Students : Nope !!
Mr Lee : Okay , if there any problem about the assignment please meet me in the teacher's office...
Students : Okay Ssaeng-nim ...

Mr Lee walks away and left the students ....

Myungsoo : So , where are we planning to go ?
Woohyun : How about in Gyeongju ?
Intan : Gyeongju ? Wow , that's a good idea ....
Myungsoo : So , if you guys agree we go this week ....
Intan : This week ! Good idea ....
Woohyun : Okay then ...its a deal ...

In other place ...

Man 1 : ( pressing number in his phone ) Hello , remember me ?
Intan's Father : Who are you ? and where did you get this number ?
Man 1 : It's been so long since we meant isn't it ?
Man 1 : you think I forgot about it don't you?
Intan's Father : Meant ? ( flashback all  things that happen a long time ago )
Man 1 :  Haha !! Finally you remember it huh ? You borrow me a lot you know .... and your times is up ...
Intan's Father : I'm sorry , but I don't have the money right now ... Can you please give me more time ....
Man 1 : More time ? No way !!! I'll give chance to you to give the money before sunsets tomorrow and don't ever think to call the police ... If do , you daughter will be dead !!!
Intan's Father : but !! wait !! I will bring the money as soon as possible .... please don't touch my daughter
Man 1 ; That's great ... Don't make me wait for you ... You know I'm a short - tempered person right ? Good luck ....

Tutttt , tutttt ,  tutttt  .... The man hung out the phone

Intan"s Mum : Dear , who is it ?
Intan's Dad : Is just a friend ... No worries ...
Intan's Mum : Are you sure ?
Intan's Dad : Uh-huh ... I have to go out for awhile ... see you later honey ....
Intan's Mum : Okay ...

On the same day .... 

Myungsoo : Let's go guys .... Or we will be late
Intan : Okay ....I'm so excited right now
Woohyun : ( she is sure a bright girl ) said Woohyun inside...

After a while , they finally arrived at Gyeongju

Myungsoo : Here we are , a place which is full with South Korea history 
Intan : The place is more picturesque than in the pic 
Woohyun : Of course , Its beautiful than a picture 
Myungsoo : Watching the scene making me hungry now 
Woohyun : Me too , let's find something to eat before we more starving 
Intan : I know a nice restoran around here ... Come follow me ....

After walking for awhile , they finally arrived to the restoran 

Intan : So let's find a place to sit around here .....
Myungsoo : there is one over there ... Let's go
Woohyun : Okay ....

They went and sat over there waiting for a waitress to take their order ...

Waitress : Hello there , welcome ... Can I take you order ?
Intan : Sure ...
Waitress : ( Give them the menu )
Myungsoo : Please give me this and I want it to be in set
Woohyun : Me too ....
Intan : I will like to order this one ... It will be in ala carte ...
Waitress : Anything else ? 
Intan : Urmm .... can you give me one wedges with cheese on top of it  ... Thanks ...
 Waitress : Okay ... please wait for a while .... You guys will be serve in a while ....
Myungsoo : Okay , thanks ....

The waitress walks away ....

Intan : Urmmmm .... I need to go to the bathroom for awhile .... 
Myungsoo : Okay .... 

Intan walks to the toilet .... Without her noticing someone in black cover up her mouth and make her fainted .....

Back to their table .....

Waitress : Here are you order ... thanks for waiting patiently .... Please enjoy your food .... 
Woohyun : Okay thanks ....
Myungsoo : Let's eat !! 
Woohyun : Myungsoo~ah , where is Intan ? She must already here ... Its already 15 minutes since she went to the toilet ....
Myungsoo : You're right .... Is something happen ?
Woohyun : Tried to call her .... 
Myungsoo : ( He took out his phone and call Intan ) 

" Please try again later "

Myungsoo : No answered ....
Woohyun : Are you sure ? 
Myungsoo : How about you try call her ?
Woohyun : ( He took out his phone and call Intan )

" the number that you've dailed is not available ... Please send a voicemail after beep " 
BEEP ....

Woohyun : Not answered too .... Making me worry now ..... 
Myungsoo : ( got a phone call ) What !!!!! 
Woohyun : What happen ? 


In Intan's family house ....

 " Daddy !!! , Please help me !!! " 

Intan's Father : Intan !! Are you okay ? YAH!!!!! 
Man   : You heard that right  ? No time to be waste ... Quickly bring those money or your daughter will be dead ...
Intan's Father : Don't put a single finger on my daughter ... Your PUNK !!! 
Man : If you don't that to be happen ... Quickly bring those money ... I will give you chance until the sunsets.... 
Intan's Father : Yes ! I will bring those money .... and I begging you don't touch my daughter ...
Man :  ( Hung Out the phone )

Back to the restoran ....

Woohyun : What happen ? 
Myungsoo : Intan !! Intan hve been kidnap ... and now she was lock in..
Woohyun : Kidnap ?! What do you mean by kidnap .... 
Myungsoo : Her father just called me....
Woohyun : Come on !! Let's search for her now... any hint ?
Myungsoo : No , but i thinks she's in a place from here .... 
Woohyun : oKay , let's try to search her nerby first ....

In the place where Intan will been lock in ...

Intan : Yah !!! You son of b**** .... Let me go !! You Idiot!!!
Man 1 : Shut Up !!!! What a troublesome girl ...
Man 2 : eat this !!!( give you a dry bread and a cup of water)
Intan : Who are you ? and what you want from me ?
Man 1 : No worries dear .... ( wipe his tumb on your lips ) 
Intan : ( you slap him ) PANGG!!
Man 2 : You sure a cute little kitten .... especially when you angry .... ( the man come more nearer to you )
Intan : Woohyun ~~Ah !!!! 

By coincindence Woohyun come in and took you away ....

Woohyun : Move your flirty hands off her ... You Punk !!! ( Woohyun punch the man )
Man 1 :  You quite strong .... but not with me ... ( the man punch Woohyun back ) 
Myungsoo : Intan , Gwenchana ?
Intan : Urmmm .... thanks for coming ...
Myungsoo : Urmmm .... You're welcome ... Come on let's get out from this place ..

Finally the police come and caught all the criminal ...... Intan was save by the help of Myungsoo and Woohyun ..... and so does Intan's Father ...

Intan : I'm sorry Woohyun~ah ..... I just got irritated with the girls and all kind of think about you ... I don't know why ...
Woohyun : I've already forget about those things ..... Intan , can you follow me for a sec ...
Intan : Sure , but where you want to bring me ...
Woohyun : Just follow me ...

Woohyun bought you to a place where full of picturesque view .... 

Intan : Woow !! Its really a beautiful view .... Thanks Woohyun ..... 
Woohyun : You're welcome .... I have something for you ..... 
Intan : What is it ? 
Woohyun : ( took out a box ) 
Intan : What is that ?
Woohyun : Open the box ....
Intan : ( Open the box and saw a necklace same as Woohyun necklace ) A couple necklace !! I love it .... Thanks Woohyun~ah ...
Woohyun : Intan , I will said this once .... I love you ....
Intan : ( Got shocked ) me too !! I love you so much and that's why I don't want any girl close to you ....
Woohyun : Okay , I'll promise ....


THE END !!! 


Sorry Dongsaeng ~ ah ... for posting it late ... This is a special story for you ( Is it special ? ) I'm sorry if the story not satisfied you .... I will try my best in future ....